On page 2, line 35, after "uncles" strike all material through "gift" and insert "((, that is a bona fide gift))"
On page 3, line 25, after "(g)" insert "The owner of a firearm and other persons who remain in the presence of the firearm owner and the firearm is retained by the owner once the other persons have departed from the presence of the firearm owner;
(h)"